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Offline Arwyn

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The Bloody Half Hundred (fiction)
« on: January 24, 2017, 09:56:17 PM »
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Re: The Bloody Half Hundred (fiction)
« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2017, 11:40:15 PM »
Excellent writing, I would call it a page turner but there's only one page so far :p
" Why is this godforsaken hellhole worth dying for? "
". . .  We know nothing about them, their language, their history or what they look like.  But we can assume this.  They stand for everything we don't stand for.  Also they told me you guys look like dorks. "
"Stop exploding, you cowards.  "
 

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Re: The Bloody Half Hundred (fiction)
« Reply #2 on: January 25, 2017, 04:22:25 PM »
Excellent writing, I would call it a page turner but there's only one page so far :p
I can't improve on that comment, so I'm just going to agree with it.  8)
 

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Re: The Bloody Half Hundred (fiction)
« Reply #3 on: March 14, 2017, 12:02:43 AM »
Nice indeed!
 

 

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