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Posted by: Beersatron
« on: December 04, 2009, 06:42:45 PM »

Get well soon!
Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: December 04, 2009, 01:50:46 PM »

Quote from: "myronicus"
Be careful that you keep a consistent diet, if you fluctuate your levels of green leafy vegtables(salad's) it can screw up your clotting times(I am a pharmacist).  If you stop salads when you had them before your blood will over thin, and if you increase it will get too thick(green leafy's have vitamin K in it).

Myronicus

Myronicus, Thanks for the tip. And I think that may be part of the problem. My intake of greens is spotty at best.  :evil:   :(



Cheers, Thor
Posted by: myronicus
« on: November 30, 2009, 10:24:59 PM »

Quote from: "Þórgrímr"
Quote from: "Beersatron"
Have you had the chance to write some more on the gunny or roman stories?

I am re-reading the David Weber Starfire books atm, and although they are very good - I kind of know what is going to happen! heh :evil:

I will try to get something done in the next few days.   :D



Cheers, Thor
Be careful that you keep a consistent diet, if you fluctuate your levels of green leafy vegtables(salad's) it can screw up your clotting times(I am a pharmacist).  If you stop salads when you had them before your blood will over thin, and if you increase it will get too thick(green leafy's have vitamin K in it).

Myronicus
Posted by: ShadoCat
« on: November 29, 2009, 10:33:03 PM »

Quote from: "Þórgrímr"
I am sorry, but no. I spent the last two weeks in the hospital. Had another bout of Bi-Lat PE troubles again. These damned doctors seem to be having trouble getting the dosage of warfarin I need to keep it from happening.  :D

The important thing is that you get better.

Write more when you enjoy writing more (aside from making for a better life, it makes for better writing).
Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: November 28, 2009, 06:00:44 PM »

Quote from: "Beersatron"
Have you had the chance to write some more on the gunny or roman stories?

I am re-reading the David Weber Starfire books atm, and although they are very good - I kind of know what is going to happen! heh :evil:

I will try to get something done in the next few days.   :D



Cheers, Thor
Posted by: Beersatron
« on: November 23, 2009, 11:46:15 AM »

Have you had the chance to write some more on the gunny or roman stories?

I am re-reading the David Weber Starfire books atm, and although they are very good - I kind of know what is going to happen! heh :)
Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: October 21, 2009, 11:51:03 PM »

Gents, I apologize for not posting. I have been busting my hump trying to get the setups completed for the next BTS! Playtest.

This test will be a simple game. The test will start January 1830, and is scheduled to run until 1918. This test will allow us to test the Diplomatic, Espionage, Supply, and a whole host of other rules.  :D



Cheers, Thor
Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: October 16, 2009, 09:58:06 PM »

Quote from: "ShadoCat"
Talking about Jeff Sutton:

"I think is going to be our talker, since he claims that he has the ‘gift of gab’.”

Maybe:  "I think he's...."

Thanks for the spot. One o them pesky typos.  :D

EDIT: New sentences. These should cover your two posts my friend. If a Ghoul could become red-faced with embarrassment Jason would have been beet red by now and stammered,

I think he's going to be our front man. He claims that he has the ‘gift of gab’.” He said looking from Jason back to Jeff.



Cheers, Thor
Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: October 16, 2009, 08:16:14 PM »

Quote from: "ShadoCat"
MFD:

"With the introductions disposed of the Gunny took the new guys"

Maybe get rid of the "the" before Gunny?  I guess it depends on if you are using it as a title or a nickname.

This is another one of those sentences that gives me grief. But I think I can take out the extra the.  :D



Cheers, Thor
Posted by: ShadoCat
« on: October 16, 2009, 07:52:27 PM »

MFD:

"With the introductions disposed of the Gunny took the new guys"

Maybe get rid of the "the" before Gunny?  I guess it depends on if you are using it as a title or a nickname.
Posted by: ShadoCat
« on: October 16, 2009, 07:51:02 PM »

Talking about Jeff Sutton:

"I think is going to be our talker, since he claims that he has the ‘gift of gab’.”

Maybe:  "I think he's...."
Posted by: ShadoCat
« on: October 16, 2009, 07:45:30 PM »

"If a Ghoul could become embarrassed and have his face flush red Jason would have been beet red by now"

I don't think that anything prevents a ghoul from being embarrassed.  Also, "red" shouldn't be repeated, I think.

Maybe something like:

"If a ghoul's face could flush, Jason would have been beet red from embarrassment."

I'm not entirely happy with what I came up with but I think that it is along the right lines.
Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: October 16, 2009, 02:06:54 PM »

Quote from: "Beersatron"
Would it sound better with:

"The greedy cold grasp of the desert hardpan was already sapping his body’s warmth. Alas, if he could not get up this would be his death warrant."

Yep, and changed.  :D



Cheers, Thor
Posted by: Beersatron
« on: October 15, 2009, 10:28:19 PM »

"The greedy cold grasp of the desert hardpan was already sapping his body’s warmth, alas, if he could not get up this would be his death warrant."

Would it sound better with:

"The greedy cold grasp of the desert hardpan was already sapping his body’s warmth. Alas, if he could not get up this would be his death warrant."
Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: October 15, 2009, 04:41:56 PM »

Quote from: "Beersatron"
we have a winner :D



Cheers, Thor