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Offline rawghi (OP)

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« on: October 12, 2010, 04:25:04 AM »
Use this post for comments, criticism and suggestions.
This to keep fiction posts clean for better reading.
Thanks
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« Reply #1 on: October 12, 2010, 07:26:58 AM »
I love the logo in the first chapter!

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« Reply #2 on: October 12, 2010, 08:26:54 AM »
Thank you Steve! Feel free if you with to add it to the flag pack! I'll post here a jpg version

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« Reply #3 on: October 12, 2010, 09:59:46 AM »
Well, you sure are backing up your story with nice pictures.
That gives some tremendous flavour, despite no actual story visible so far :D
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« Reply #4 on: October 12, 2010, 10:42:11 AM »
Quote from: UnLimiTeD on October 12, 2010, 09:59:46 AM
Well, you sure are backing up your story with nice pictures.
That gives some tremendous flavour, despite no actual story visible so far :D

ahah yes Unlimited! I tend to post lot of images in my aar.. but this time I hope to invest more on story!
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« Reply #5 on: October 12, 2010, 01:39:26 PM »
You know, you mentioned four systems in the prologue, but I only count three...

Also, how'd you colonize Phobos? You have a bunch of habitats in orbit?
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« Reply #6 on: October 13, 2010, 01:19:11 AM »
Quote from: Vanigo on October 12, 2010, 01:39:26 PM
You know, you mentioned four systems in the prologue, but I only count three...

Also, how'd you colonize Phobos? You have a bunch of habitats in orbit?

yes they are four, I've not yet finished the colony post!  ;D

I've edited the planet with the terraforming tab, for the custom start I mentioned
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« Reply #7 on: October 13, 2010, 04:24:58 AM »
Well, can you change the gravity there?
Normally, theres a limit that doesn't even allow luna to be colonized.
I guess your background has some really high tech or something? How could one colonize Io otherwise, what with it's surface basically being exchanged several times per year?
And a Planet with an 86 earth day day would probably have a cold-warm border, and thus extreme storms that rip everything up.
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« Reply #8 on: October 13, 2010, 04:53:14 AM »
Quote from: UnLimiTeD on October 13, 2010, 04:24:58 AM
Well, can you change the gravity there?
Normally, theres a limit that doesn't even allow luna to be colonized.
I guess your background has some really high tech or something? How could one colonize Io otherwise, what with it's surface basically being exchanged several times per year?
And a Planet with an 86 earth day day would probably have a cold-warm border, and thus extreme storms that rip everything up.

No I changed the gravity tolerance, to be honest I discovered only now the problem of Io volcanic eruption, I based the colonization of it from the movie "Outland" (with Sean Connery).
For the gravity I assumed that for some reason the colonies had a "special" gravity generator like many sci-fi environment, o better, the gravity wasn't considered at all.

But for flavour I think that when I'll colonize new planets I surely search for tolerable gravity.

I made mainly this choiche because I wish to have less systems but with many colonies at the start
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« Reply #9 on: October 13, 2010, 05:19:40 AM »
Well, you could always use orbital Habs ;)
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« Reply #10 on: October 13, 2010, 05:37:59 AM »
Quote from: UnLimiTeD on October 13, 2010, 05:19:40 AM
Well, you could always use orbital Habs ;)

Yep! you're right!
Ah, I forgot to congratulate with you for your aar, I'm one of your fans!  ;)
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« Reply #11 on: October 13, 2010, 08:56:53 AM »
Damn, the Lunatics are everywhere.  ;D

You got a nice fluff, but I sometimes find the grammar confusing.^^
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« Reply #12 on: October 13, 2010, 09:10:08 AM »
Quote from: UnLimiTeD on October 13, 2010, 08:56:53 AM
Damn, the Lunatics are everywhere.  ;D

You got a nice fluff, but I sometimes find the grammar confusing.^^

Confusing you said? TERRIBLE I say! :) Sorry but my english isn't really fluent.. or better.. is awful!
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