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Fiction => Starfire => Topic started by: idahobeef on July 10, 2008, 06:00:47 PM

Title: The Armageddon War
Post by: idahobeef on July 10, 2008, 06:00:47 PM

I am happy to announce my book: the Armageddon War. It is a 3rd edition book. Troy Cash has thankfully done my website. Check it out. Thanks, Damon

http://www.ilkar.ws/starfire/damon-univ ... index.html (http://www.ilkar.ws/starfire/damon-universes/armageddon/index.html)

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Post by: ShadoCat on July 12, 2008, 12:02:26 AM

It's nice but please kill the italics.  Combined with the starry background, it is very had to read.

You might want to up the font size a bit too.  That'll make it easier to read and won't require a lot of editing.

Try a light blue for the text.  That might make it more readable against the stars.

Title: Background
Post by: idahobeef on July 13, 2008, 07:51:09 PM

Hey buddy, yeah I have asked Troy to change the background from starry to something else as I cannot read it myself. I am sure he will get around to it sometime. Cheers! Damon

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Post by: SteveAlt on July 13, 2008, 10:43:33 PM

I can find the various background information sections, such as characters, maps, etc. but I am struggling to find the actual text of the novel. I know I am just being dim but please let me know what I am missing.

Steve

Title: Subject matter?
Post by: idahobeef on July 13, 2008, 11:18:11 PM

Actually, I am writing it right now. The first chapter is done and will be posted in Skymarshal 10, which will be ready in a week or two. Thanks for asking! Damon

Title: Re: The Armageddon War
Post by: Troy Cash on November 03, 2008, 06:53:09 PM

Whoops me bad!

The new background better.