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As for the story. Maybe sprinkle in some German words. Like when the witch said "Naturally", maybe change it to "Natürlich". Don't go translating whole sentences, but the occasional word or epithet might be good "Gott im Himmel!" (God in Heaven!) That type of thing. Might bring more attention to who the Germans are and who aren't.
@ Erik: Yep, I do that. And I am pretty sure you can tell who the ####s are, and who are not.
@Martinuzz: Thanks, I am really trying to capture the mindset of the ####s. But as an American it is hard. To me the callous way they classified and cold-bloodedly executed other human beings like they did would be hard for most folks to portray. But, fortunately, I have plenty of reference material to fall back on.
@ MattyD, I like the humor, but the camp is located on the the penninsula in antarctica, that is closest to Argentina, so is in range, but just. Although I like your suggestion of the Condor, so will change it to that bird.
Cheers, Thor