Aurora 4x

Fiction => ExChairman's Fiction => Aurora => Inherit the Stars => Topic started by: ExChairman on June 10, 2012, 02:22:57 PM

Title: Commentaries
Post by: ExChairman on June 10, 2012, 02:22:57 PM

Feel free to come with commentaries...  :)

Title: Re: Commentaries
Post by: Erik L on June 10, 2012, 02:32:27 PM

Can I go fix your grammar? ;)

I know English is not your native language, and you did very well however there were some phrases and the like that were just wrong. :)

Title: Re: Commentaries
Post by: ExChairman on June 10, 2012, 04:01:55 PM

Yes  ;D that you can, to old to remember my school.

Title: Re: Commentaries
Post by: xeryon on June 10, 2012, 09:29:16 PM

So far so good.  I wasn't really liking the idea of retrofitting the freighter but it's your story and I am interested in seeing where you go with it.  If you did everything I thought/wanted you to do I might as well just write it myself.  The unexpected makes for a good story.