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Posted by: ExChairman
« on: March 26, 2012, 10:52:12 PM »

The new format at the start of this Chapter is better by far :)

I noticed one spelling mistake you seem to make quite often, you say 'sins' and I presume you mean 'since'. There are a few grammatical errors too but it is perfectly readable for what I presume is your second language.

Keep it up!

Hi
OOPSSS, it's a "bit" difference between sins and since.... :D  Should use the spell check more i think, even thou it don't would give that away... ;)

Thanks
Posted by: Beersatron
« on: March 26, 2012, 03:12:38 PM »

The new format at the start of this Chapter is better by far :)

I noticed one spelling mistake you seem to make quite often, you say 'sins' and I presume you mean 'since'. There are a few grammatical errors too but it is perfectly readable for what I presume is your second language.

Keep it up!
Posted by: ExChairman
« on: March 26, 2012, 04:46:02 AM »

Chapter Five




15th June 2027 Today the first warship of the Empire was christened by the Emperor, Canada will be tested during two years. Commander Natasha Austins are given command of the ship and it sets of for its first trials and training exercises.

15th September 2027 A team on Earth led by Nils Blomqvist has completed research into 12cm MLA Gun, the testing on Earth is promising the first test fire is conducted a large platform built outside the old city of Ghent, still to radioactive to stay in more that a day or two, the target several Soviet T-72, almost 7500 meters away, first fire misses, mostly because they forgot about Earths gravitation, the second shot totally destroys the old tank. In space we estimates that the gun will fire up to 20000 km and at short range do double damage than the 10 cm MLA gun.

11th November 2027 We are starting to build a new underground HQ to be able to manage the space navy's day to day working, with the help of Earths construction capacity it should take about 2 months to get it finished. It's like the old US NORAD, built into a mountain, it's exact location is a secret, but somewhere in the Pyrenees on Earth.

7th January 2028 The Imperial HQ is finished and taken over by the navy personnel that will man it, some of the positions are not in operation from the beginning but manned and tested.
Task Force Commander: Commodore Isabelle Wheeler
Staff Officers
Operations: Captain Elliot Connolly
Intelligence: Captain Goto Taji
Survey: Captain Sir Patrick Lloyd
Logistics: Captain Kamo Rei
Communications: Captain Thea Sanderg
Public Affairs: Captain Elizabeth Baxter
Fighter Operations: Captain Noèmi Florit

11th November 2027 Renèe Dàrras has been investigating a new approach to the star gates and is proposing a new idea, its not an star gate but a machine to open wormholes, she thinks that most star system have these wormholes but they need a "mechanical" help to open and let a ship throe. Sins no one is taking head she has asked for an audience with the Emperor and he has listened to her, taken the papers and then dismissed her.  After an hour Renèe is summoned back and given 7 research centre for 2 years.

11th January 2028 Akira Kawasaki and Leon Townsend have both been researching a system to stop meteorites but so far they haveonly been able to build a un prototype Gauss gun and still not been able to incorporate an increased speed that are needed in space, they both are transferred to other projects and Leon Townsend is place in charge of a single project to build a good defence system, we coud use them in a turret to build a large close in system.

2nd June 2028 Unrest is rising on Mars due to overcrowding. The people of Mars are rioting, well only a small part are rioting, but still some 10000 are attacking shops and banking districts, tha Mars Governor, Handa Yoshi, asks the Emperor for help, the police tries to handle the rioters but cant contain both the violent parts as well as the more than hundred thousend peacefull protesters, the Emperor gives the army of Mars order to interfere with the rioters and arrest those that are breaking the law.

1st July 2028 A team on Earth led by Leon Townsend have been researching a ship defence for small meteorites but in the end it can be used as a defence system against any type of fast closing object, its called CIWS Type 1.
 
1st September 2028 We don't have enough experienced commanders to fill our ships we are now expanding our military Academy's from 1 to 10, this expansion will take about 3 years to accomplish but should give us a larger officer base to build our army and navy on. The french Academy École Spéciale Militaire de Saint-Cyr is being upgraded with all the new academies and are soon able to start training all types of wanted personnel, even scentist are being screened for training. A new Imperial Law will start in 1st of January 2030 and from that date all children from their 5th year will bee screened for their IQ and aptitudes to certain goals for the sake of the Empire.

1st September 2028, Monday, 0200, Mars Seargent Major Peter Högborg enters a building in central Cydonia, after shooting a female guard moves to a gymnasium, were an illegal rally are taking place, more than 50 people are gathered their to listen to the speaker, no one knows exactly what´s starts the Seargent Majors attack on the unarmed civilians, but when he uses his service weapon he kills and wounds more than 30 people before its stops working, after that he uses a knife on the wounded, when locale police responds to the incident he surrenders to them. Later that day Cydonia and several other cities on Mars raise in a rebellion against the Empire. It is estimated that almost 1000000 people takes part in the Free Mars Movement Now rebellion, street fighting contious for days before the 2 army brigades manages to restore some order, hundreds are killed in the vicious street fights that erupts all over Mars.

15th September 2028, Mars The Mars Rebellion is over, more than a thousend people dies in the fighting that follows 1st September massacre.

1st October 2028 20:02:11,Mars In a explosion Scientist Reece Whitehouse was been killed in an accident. Assignment prior to death: Research Project: Electronic Warfare for the moment the research is placed on a hold, we don´t know what caused the explosion. Reece Whitehouse was 39 years when she was killed. In an statement from the Emperor, "This is a tragic loss for Reece´s family but also a great loss for Me and the Empire, she will be dearly rememberd" She will be buried in her hometown of New Manchester in 3 days.

9th October 2028 There are evidence of faul play in Reece Whitehouse death, the explosion wasn´t an accident but a delliberant act of treason, she was killed by a bomb planted inside the test equipment, sofar no one has been charged with her murder, but Mars police still are searching for clues.

13th October 2028 Evidence are pointing to the Free Mars Now movement, they have bee causing problems from time to time. They are placed under special investigation for now, still there is no proof they planted the bomb.

3rd November 2028 Janus Wooshler are arrested for the bombing and murder of Reece Whitehouse.  

11th November 2028 Brigadier Ino Kinfuyu has developed problem with is heart that will affect his long term health. For the moment he will stay in command of 1st Engineer regiment but if he has more problems with his heart he will probobly get a medical discharge from the army and live on a pension.

29th December 2028 Commander Callum Cunningham opens a cabinet and is dusted by a white powder that he inhales, it should not bee harmful but callum reaction is sever, he is taken to the nearest hospital of Cydonia, he is removed from his Xenoarchelogical team faor the time being.

12th January 2029 In a closed hearing Janus Wooshler is sentensed do death for the murder on Reece Whitehouse, the evidence are massive and the jury only takes 1 hour before they give their answer.

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12th January 2027 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

12th January 2027 Mason Bird has joined your scientific establishment.  Research (Sensors and Fire Control) 25%  Administration Rating 4  Political Reliability 15%:  Promotion Score 225

12th January 2027 The Xenology Bonus of Colonel Iris Ivarsson has increased to 16%

12th January 2027 The Emilia Hedlund Geology Team does not believe any new mineral deposits can be found by the further geological survey of Venus

12th February 2027 2nd Mobile Brigade Headquarters trained on Earth

12th February 2027 The Emilia Hedlund Geology Team does not believe any new mineral deposits can be found by the further geological survey of Venus

12th February 2027 2nd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

12th February 2027 Construction of Terraforming Installation completed on Earth

27th February 2027 The Emilia Hedlund Geology Team does not believe any new mineral deposits can be found by the further geological survey of Venus

27th February 2027 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

27th February 2027 A team on Earth led by Akira Kawasaki has completed research into Capacitor Recharge Rate 3

27th March 2027 Colonel Sven Lundqvist has been assigned to 33rd Replacement Battalion (Ground Combat Bonus 0%)

27th March 2027 The Emilia Hedlund Geology Team does not believe any new mineral deposits can be found by the further geological survey of Venus

27th March 2027 Sven Lundqvist has joined your army officer corps.:  Promotion Score 0

2nd April 2027 The Emilia Hedlund Geology Team does not believe any new mineral deposits can be found by the further geological survey of Venus

2nd April 2027 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned Mine on Mars

2nd April 2027 The Xenology Bonus of Brigadier Ino Kinfuyu has increased to 11%

2nd May 2027 A team on Earth led by Leon Townsend has completed research into 12cm Railgun

2nd May 2027 2nd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

2nd June 2027 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned Terraforming Installation on Mars

2nd June 2027 A team on Earth led by Akira Kawasaki has completed research into Fire Control Speed Rating 2000 km/s

2nd June 2027 Rebecka Lund has joined your civilian administration.  Shipbuilding 15%  Factory Prod 30%  Wealth Creation 5%  Terraforming 10%  Xenology 15%:  Promotion Score 0

2nd June 2027 The Morale of 1st Engineer regiment has increased to 102

13th June 2027 Minerals Discovered on Sol-A Asteroid #239: Neutronium 1,225 (1)  

15th June 2027 5000 tons of capacity added to Kockums Naval Yard on Earth

15th August 2027 A team on Earth led by Mitsukuri Kamlyn has completed research into Beam Fire Control Range 16,000 km

15th August 2027 Goto Taji has joined your naval officer corps.  Initiative 123  Crew Training Rating 50  Mining 25%  Political Reliability 10%  Intelligence 15%:  Promotion Score 318

15th August 2027 Through training or experience, Captain Natasha Austin has increased his Training Bonus to 150

4th September 2027 Minerals Discovered on Sol-A Asteroid #307: Boronide 234 (1)  

15th September 2027 3rd Engineer Regiment trained on Earth

15th September 2027 4th Engineer regiment trained on Earth

15th September 2027 1st Engineer regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

15th September 2027 5000 tons of capacity added to Yokosuka Naval Yards on Earth

11th October 2027 810 research points for Command Module have been gained as a result of component disassembly

11th October 2027 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered 47x Command Module on Mars

11th October 2027 3rd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

11th October 2027 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

11th October 2027 With the help of disassembeling 3 command modules we could get enough information to research into Crew Quarters - Small, these should give us a more fexible way of building smaller ships were the big crew quarter is to bulky to fit.

11th October 2027 After continuing disassembling command modules a further 640 research points for Crew Quarters - Small have been gained as a result of component disassembly

11th November 2027 Leo Sundqvist has joined your army officer corps.  Ground Combat 5%  Xenology 15%  Ground Forces Training 50:  Promotion Score 94

11th November 2027 Colonel Leo Sundqvist has been assigned to 4th Engineer Regiment (Xenology Bonus 15%)

11th November 2027 3rd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Research Facility on Mars

11th November 2027 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

11th November 2027 A team on Earth led by Olivia Jenkins has completed research into Railgun Launch Velocity 2

11th November 2027 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

11th December 2027 4th Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Genetic Modification Centre on Mars

11th December 2027 1st Engineer regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

11th December 2027 3rd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Fuel Refinery on Mars

11th January 2028 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

11th January 2028 Elliot Connolly has joined your naval officer corps.  Initiative 150  Crew Training Rating 50  Survey 10%  Fighter Ops 20%  Logistics 10%  Operations 15%:  Promotion Score 538

11th January 2028 3rd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

11th January 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has recovered 750 tons of stored Sorium on Mars

11th February 2028 Through training or experience, Civilian Administrator Efraim Quiñónez Aragón has increased his Ground Unit Construction Speed Bonus to 10%

11th February 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

11th February 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

11th March 2028 The Emilia Hedlund Geology Team does not believe any new mineral deposits can be found by the further geological survey of Venus

11th March 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Mine on Mars

11th April 2028 Jacob Samuelsson has joined your army officer corps.  Ground Combat 25%:  Promotion Score 625

11th May 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Construction Factory on Mars

11th May 2028 Through experience as a project leader, Scientist Mason Bird has increased his Research Bonus to 35%

11th May 2028 3rd Engineer Regiment has recovered 14x Pebble Bed Reactor Technology PB-1 on Mars, esentially the same as our design.

11th May 2028 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

1st June 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered 2x Pebble Bed Reactor Technology PB-1 on Mars

1st July 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Mine on Mars

1st July 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

1st July 2028 Through training or experience, Civilian Administrator Handa Yoshi has increased his Terraforming Bonus to 20%

1st July 2028 A civilian mining colony has been established on Sol-A Asteroid #177

1st August 2028 The supply of Neutronium on Sol-A Asteroid #177 has been exhausted

1st August 2028 A team on Earth led by Mason Bird has completed research into Beam Fire Control Range 24,000 km

1st August 2028 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

1st August 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Mine on Mars

1st September 2028 Thirza Rosenstern has joined your naval officer corps.  Initiative 139  Terraforming 10%  Political Reliability 25%:  Promotion Score 695

1st September 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

1st September 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

1st October 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Deep Space Tracking System on Mars

1st October 2028 3rd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

1st October 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

1st October 2028 Commander Märta Lundin has been assigned to Viking II 001 (Survey Bonus 18%)

19th October 2028 3rd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

19th October 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

19th November 2028 3rd Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

19th November 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Mine on Mars

19th November 2028 1st Engineer regiment has recovered an abandoned Mine on Mars

19th November 2028 Matilda Isaksson has joined your civilian administration.  Administration Rating 4  Wealth Creation 10%  Pop Growth 5%  Political Reliability 10%:  Promotion Score 100

19th November 2028 The supply of Mercassium on Earth has been exhausted, the first mineral to run out on Earth, we have almost 71000 tons of it mined and on Mars there are some 400000 tons in the ground.

19th November 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has recovered 1200 tons of stored Sorium on Mars

19th December 2028 2nd Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned automated mine on Mars

19th December 2028 4th Engineer Regiment has recovered an abandoned Deep Space Tracking System on Mars

19th December 2028 The Xenology Bonus of Colonel Leo Sundqvist has increased to 16%

29th December 2028 Nemoto Wakana has joined your naval officer corps.  Initiative 184:  Promotion Score 92

29th December 2028 1st Engineer regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair

29th December 2028 ,4th Engineer Regiment has attempted to recover an alien installation on Mars but the installation was beyond repair