Posted by: Þórgrímr
« on: March 25, 2010, 09:06:55 AM »Posted the Roman Starships.
Cheers, Thor
Cheers, Thor
Yay, no more banging my head on the desk. Luckly, I have a padded wrist support on my mouse pad and have been hitting that, so no bumps or serious trauma. LOL
Mark
Just letting you know I can't wait for more. You have really sucked me into the story, left me banging my head on my desk wanting more with your ending today(25th). Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing with us.
Mark
Just letting you know I can't wait for more. You have really sucked me into the story, left me banging my head on my desk wanting more with your ending today(25th). Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing with us.What he said, minus the headdesk.
Mark
A hearty welcome back from me as well Thor.
One very minor point. If you are using the current SAS as a model then there would be no Royal Marines in it. The RM have their own Special Forces in the form of the Special Boat Section (SBS). LIke I said a minor point. I do enjoy your Roman stories
Cheers, Thor
I've had an asthma attack or two so I have the barest inkling of that that must be like.
I hope that working on this will help keep your brain active.
BTW, a PM is on the way.
Quote from: "ShadoCat"Welcome back Thor.
I was a bit worried.
Thanks bud. And for a while there it was touch and go. At times I had to use a machine and medicated oxygen to breathe. Still gotta use it every now and then. Let me tell you, it ain't fun feeling like a fish out of water and fighting for every breath you take.
YAY! Romans! \o/
There's a few minor spelling errors here and there, and I haven't gotten the faintest idea whether the Latin is correct, but beyond that everything seems good. You might want to keep the 'surprise' phase going a bit longer, though. Both of these groups are meeting other humans, and the Romans are meeting humans they weren't expecting who know their language. While I can understand a soldier would cut to the point and leave the details to the eggheads, the change from 'wtf' to 'smile' seems unreasonably fast.