I have read all of you stories and was ready to go up the wall when it ended suddenly and left me guessing.
As for telling you what doesn´t work, well, I realy don´t feel qualified to do that.
Ralph Hoenig, Germany
Hawkeye, I am happy you like the stories, but as far as I am concerned, you are qualified to comment. This board is populated by intelligent folks, and that means we all know what sounds logical, plausible, and above all reasonable. So if you have an opinion on something that does not quite ring true to you, please, by all means, throw in your two cents.
And in the new version since I am not too familiar with large European research labs beyond CERN I will need input by the rest of the planet as to research labs, corporations, and any other details that may be missing, but required to get the global feel I am shooting for in this story.
Cheers, Thor