Post 6I hope that this is what you are looking for...
First paragraph. I'll make the grammar changes in the paragraph. There are many minor issues, mostly dealing with commas.
There are two typos: "outmanoeuvre" (two words) and "exploded space" (explored?).
Sakiko leaned back into her chair staring out her office window. Darkness shrouded the city skyline; with small specks of light the only identifier the city was there. Her thoughts were contemplating how to tactically out maneuver her opponent. She looked back towards the phonevid screen, “Minister Tako. How am I suppose to protect your geo survey ships when I don’t even have enough ships to defend a small portion of exploded space?” The minister was a fat pompous pig of a man whose only interest was money making to pay off his many mistresses. These were a few of the thoughts boiling in Sakiko's brain as she tried to control her anger.
The fact that the only thought was her description of Tako doesn't match with "These were a few of the thoughts boiling in Sakiko's brain..."
Maybe: it was an example of the many thoughts boiling...
Try looking at this:
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/commas.htmI won't make any further comma comments for this post.
Further down: "my dear who is he calling my dear"
Maybe use single quotes around the two "my dear"s. This indicates that she is quoting him without looking like she is speaking. Also, start a new sentence after that, sgtarting with "These."
"Our fleet is no larger in strength then"
Common mistake; should be "than". "Then" is a time indicator. Compare "rather than" with "then it happened".
"in her deliver" should be "in her delivery".
Same sentence: period after "notch"
"Sakiko had complete forgot her dinner date." should be "Sakiko had completely forgoten her dinner date."
"They had met at a defence contractors" should be "They had met at a defense contractor's" if it was one contractor or "They had met at a defense contractors' " if there were more than one contractor. Also note spelling of "defense".
"once of the primary shipping contractor to the government" looks like you changed directions mid sentence. If I read it correctly this might be better "one of the primary shipping contractors to the government"
"the leader of New Osaka most powerful" should be "the leader of New Osaka's most powerful"
"She noted a thought, " I would change to "She noted a thought: " but that is more style than rule.
"She rose and brush at" should be "She rose and brushed at"
"sneaky thought perhaps" I think the following flows better "sneaky thought that perhaps"