Thanks for the encouragement, the format is a bit different and the first time I have tried this style, I wasn't sure if it was working or not in regards to flow.
Any thoughts or suggestions are always welcome, creative writing is not my strong point, but the more you practice the better you become, so they say.
I have noticed my style is changing slightly, in each creation, but then so is the character, so if there is one style of post that works better then the rest please let me know.
Also I am making a few mistakes in this game already, but I guess this creates the freshness of a race enter space for the first time.
Thanks again I appreciate any encouragement and thoughts