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Offline Vynadan (OP)

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Commentary on Terran Reclusion
« on: October 06, 2011, 02:15:44 PM »
Well, commentary is always appreciated. For now it isn't much, but as you can see I still have quite some background story to complete ... I have it lined out quite nicely, just not fully narrated yet, so this will still take a couple days. The actual campaign will start in 2471 and tell the story of Terra and its colonies in the wild wild galaxy ;)
 

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Re: Commentary on Terran Reclusion
« Reply #1 on: October 07, 2011, 09:08:34 PM »
Well I shall be a regularly reader for sure. I have always enjoyed everyone stories, I think the biggest followers and reader are other fiction writers on this board.

Good luck with your fiction.
 

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Re: Commentary on Terran Reclusion
« Reply #2 on: October 08, 2011, 06:22:29 AM »
Just fixed some typos and errors in WW3 and enhanced it rhetorically with the help of FGRaptor. I'm not a native speaker and strife for improvement, so feel free to point out any weird sounding phrases or errors you might find (also surprising content on how nations behaved is appreciated).
Nothing of the story was changed, so it isn't worth re-reading if you dislike such long texts, but it should now sound better in some places.
 

 

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