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Offline ExChairman (OP)

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« on: June 10, 2012, 02:22:57 PM »
Feel free to come with commentaries...  :)
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« Reply #1 on: June 10, 2012, 02:32:27 PM »
Can I go fix your grammar? ;)

I know English is not your native language, and you did very well however there were some phrases and the like that were just wrong. :)
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« Reply #2 on: June 10, 2012, 04:01:55 PM »
Yes  ;D that you can, to old to remember my school.
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« Reply #3 on: June 10, 2012, 09:29:16 PM »
So far so good.  I wasn't really liking the idea of retrofitting the freighter but it's your story and I am interested in seeing where you go with it.  If you did everything I thought/wanted you to do I might as well just write it myself.  The unexpected makes for a good story.
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