Looks alright.
Might drop one of the B-FCS for the turrets, potentially split the engines into two different engines. Unless you're role-playing, the Electronic Hardening only works vs. Microwave weapons, so you can probably do without it.
Deployment is really high, and your MSP isn't great considering that beam weapons now eat MSP. The IFR is definitely sensible, too many folks underbuid their Engineering Spaces. I'd try slashing about 3 months of deployment and shoving some Maintenace Storage Bays in, and you should be golden.